Ms. Anyae Dudley and Group: http://robeson1.pen.io/
Aysia, Ayinde, Quadir, Gary, and Tiera: http://robeson2.pen.io/
Aliyah McClary and Group; http://robeson3.pen.io/
Aliah Evans and Group: http://robeson4.pen.io/
Mr. Bolen: http://robeson5.pen.io/
14 comments:
In this letter I like the way they discussed the problem to the mayor on flashmobs. In their letter I liked the fact that they said their should be more after school activities, and more summer programs. All In All I enjoyed reading this letter .
I liked the letter by Aliah Evans. It was to the point and clear but it lacks evidence.
-S.Todd
My group which included Moniquetta needed more details. It lacked information and details and needs to be typed in a professional manner leaving out "&" symbols. I think my topic sentence was okay. I'm not sure about the rest of the letter because I wasn't there to go over it with the group.
-S.Todd
I like ALiah M paper. It made Mayor Nutter have to think about what else he can do in order to prevent the "flash mob".
@ aaliyah's group paper- i enjoyed readig your thoughts on the flashmobs that has been happening recently, there were so good points made.
-nicole
@aaliyah's group i enjoyed reading your letter there were some good points made, and u asked good questions.
-n.wallace
Aliah Evans letter was real good. She stated some strong facts, that help her support her opinion.
I really liked the letter from Aliah Evens. She wrote very professionally.
I think Malik Bolen needs to read over his paper and rewrite and put more opinions.
-Aysia Ali
I Like The Robeson6 Letter Because They Say How They Need The After School Activities In Order To Keep The Teens Off The Streets.....They Also Stated Something About Summer Activities....I Liked It
i actually like all of the letters that were written. They all have a general idea and knowledge of what should be done and their feelings towards the arising problem. Very well written in my opinion.
i agree with gary and tiera group its not fair to punish the innocent and do he only say black and african american.....there are other races that do this to they are just to focused on the "black" kids to see the other race
I will have to say i liked all the letter they all got the point of this letter of the point good job yall
samantha nelson
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